Friday, June 10, 2016
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Amazing job Ruby! I really like your recount. I like how you put your story in chapters instead of beginning, middle and end. I see that you added a 'Ty for looking' on the end of your story, Why is the 'Ty' there?
ReplyDeleteHi Ruby I think your slide is great I love it but maybe you could put more pictures, but otherwise it's great because you have used lots of great words.
ReplyDeleteHi Ruby, I loved how you put those interesting words like flash and shadow. The story makes sense, I would like to see more pictures in your published work, Ruby.
ReplyDeleteWhat a great presentation Ruby, I too like how you have your writing in chapters. You have used some great descriptive language that helps to give your reader a picture in their heads which is awesome. Next time, could you add some speech in your writing to add even more interest? Keep up the great writing Ruby, I'm very impressed!
ReplyDeleteMagnificent work Ruby i like how you have your writing in chapters and you have used a lots of descriptive language that can help the reader and can give the reader a picture in their mind,next time could you add some speech marks in your writing to add more interest and keep up the work ruby!
ReplyDeleteHi Ruby I loved how you planned your story out. I think you put real effort into your story. Why did you choose to write about this? I think you need to make your slides transition faster.
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