Essay work Pt2 (English)

The ED start

Examples: Committed, Undaunted, determined, 

forced, gifted, blighted, thrilled, delighted, blessed, overpowered,

Slaughtered, thrilled, United, Delighted, conflicted, respected,

intimidated,

Forced into it, Alex had no choice but to obey orders

Delighted, that in front of me was a big cup of ice cream

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The W-Start sentence

Example: Who, Whom, While, When, What,

Where, Whereas, whilst

When I was asleep I was sure I could feel something looking at me, boring into my head while I slept

Whilst the children were outside playing, the teachers were having a party.

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When the world stopped spinning

Surprisingly I couldn't help but stare into the nothingness as chaos went on

Silently as it all went down in one thing

Throughout that time, I still remember how you looked at me

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PEEL

Kingdom hearts

Point - Kingdom Hearts is not understandable

Reformed point - Kingdom Hearts logic is really just weird and not understandable.

Evidence - An example of my point is in one of the seven games, Birth by Sleep, where it is possible to make human-like creatures out of the darkness from a person's body. This happened once to a boy named Ventus who's human-like creature was named Vanitas, who happened to look like another character and not like Ventus, but more like a boy named Sora.

Explain - Surprisingly this is an example of someone who has a BIG imagination. I mean, in all honesty, not even Ventus knew what Sora looked like and still managed to make Vanitas look like Sora. Where is the logic in that?

Link - Another way we see illogical stuff within Kingdom Hearts is in Kingdom Hearts 3 there is a Frozen storyline where Elsa makes ice falls all around you somehow? It also turns into a labyrinth????

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Essay INTRODUCTION

Title of your novel (Abomination)
Author of the novel (Robert Swindells)
Key Argument/Premise (The character of Martha and her changes are important to the story)
Outline of essay

1 no longer fearful - She can stand up to her dad
2 She gets friends - Builds her confidence so she's not afraid.
3 Takes more Risks - Leaves the house

(NOT DONE I REPEAT NOT DONE)

Write that Essay work (English)

The Adverb start

Curiously, quickly, importantly, firstly, remarkably, 

similarly, significantly, surprisingly, readily, Consequently, shockingly

Interestingly, Confusingly, Concerningly.

Confusingly, I stared at the object in front of me.

Surprisingly, there stood a girl who looked similar to me.

Curiously, I stuck my head out the window to see what the other kids were doing.

Shockingly, I was unable to move from the scene before me.

Quickly, I hurried to class not wanting to be late.

Ironically, the hero has an intriguing birth story that shows they are destined for a great journey.

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Begin with a Preposition

In, Against, before, between, over, behind, within, under

Below, At, For, Throughout, Near, About

Beside,

Throughout the centuries, our world changed to having new tech to creating new foods and clothes, to making new tv shows and games

Within the deep sea, lives creatures that have still yet to be discovered by humankind.

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Basic body paragraph

Point - State the point you want to make

Evidence - Provide evidence to support your point (2-3 sentences)

Explain - Explain what your point demonstrated: (2 sentences)

Link - Write a sentence linking to the next paragraph

(PEEL)

Point - Martha is bullied at school

Reformed point -  throughout the novel, 'Abomination' Martha is bullied at school

Evidence - An example of this incident with the girls

throwing water over the stall onto Martha, When she came out of the stall

They punched her in the stomach and called her a Slut, 

This made Martha feel angry and upset

Explain - Unsurprisingly, this is an example of physical bullying by students towards Martha. 

There was an imbalance of power between 

Martha and her bullies because there was one of her and three of them.

Link - Another way Martha experiences suffering is at the hands of her parents, and the church of the Righteous  

Abomination Song for Scott (Novel study)

Music- At the end of the story we discover Scott has feelings for Martha. Pick a song you think reflects their relationship and write an explanation of why you picked it. It could be a romantic, happy or sad song, what is important is why you think it is like Scott and Martha.

Candles (Text Styles)

Coffee Candles.

Materials:

3 Tablespoons of rice.

3 Tablespoons of coffee beans.

Tealight candle

Small glass jar.

Food colouring ( optional )

Add the rice into the jar evenly.

Add the coffee beans on top of the rice with small indent the size of the candle.

Put the candle in the small indent.

Decorate the jar if you want to.

Colouring rice (optional)

Add 3 tablespoons of rice into a snaplock bag with
3 drops of food colouring. Mix around until all the rice is covered.
Leave coloured rice on a tray to dry over 24 - 48 hours.

In Textstyles we are starting to make candles,
and here was our instruction, This is my Candle so far,
and I can't wait to see what it will smell like when we're finished.

(Candle)

Script work(Drama)

In Drama, we picked scripts that we had to learn to read off by heart, once we managed to do that we did some cam performing, and now we have to do the script again but by our self,

When I do the script

I need to show emotions

The Emotions I intend to show are

-Mad

-Crazy

-Furious

-Calm. 

Mad for the starting when the lines - Can you please not make me do this? Just don't-Just don't tell me what happened. If I don't know, Then I can't react, right? and so forward on

And Crazy for when it comes to this part - God, I wish you hadn't left that gun right there. It's just-I can't stop playing with it now... And you left the safety off, And I... (Then stops there)

And for Furious I continue on from Crazy - Peter, Just tell me you love me and you didn't cheat on me last night and that we'll always be together. And maybe this gun will, Maybe I'll be able to drop it.

And Calm during the end continuing from furious - And we can go out to dinner at Canale's and order that lasagna, and just... and just be us again Okay? Can you do that? For us?

Distillation experiment (Science)

Aim: separate the solute from the solvent in Coke

Hypothesis: The liquid part of coke will vanish 

Equipment: tube beaker conical-flask, Bunsen burner, Ice, retort stand, boiling tube, gauze mat, tripod, delivery tube, Coke

Method: Get equipment, Set it up and put coke in the conical-Flask and grab the bunsen burner and stick it under the trip pod, then put the flask on top of the tripod then grab your beaker and get some ice and stick the beaker with the ice next to the tripod then stick a test tube in the beaker with the ice before then sticking a delivery tube into the flask and sticking the other end in the test tube, before then lighting your match and then turning on your bunsen burner

-After the experiment-

Results/Observation: As it burns the coke, the heat goes up through the pipe and over into the test tube filling it up, as it continues the coke slowly gets devoured or vanishes, and unlike others where it makes hard stuff on the side, ours kept bubbling and dissolving. 

Conclusion:  Sort of and sort of not, Yes because it did start vanishing and no cause not all of it did

Discussion: The coke evaporated due to the heat underneath it which the evaporated water from the coke then ran over to the other side into the test tube filling it up, almost melting the ice in the beaker.

Evaluation:  I would say it was, I mean we got different outcomes from others but we had a choice of 3 bottles of coke, we used coke zero if we didn't use coke zero we might have got a different outcome