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Thursday, June 30, 2016

My goals for 2016



Theses are my goals for 2016. Every Pearson in the class had to do one and here is mine.

Wednesday, June 22, 2016

Friday, June 3, 2016

The very hungry lion (second draft)



W.A.L.T recall  events through the eyes of an animal.
Sequence of events:  What happened? Describe using the senses (hear, taste, see, smell and feel).
Personal Comment:  How did the events make you feel?    

Written improvements in red.

The Very Hungry Lion

 One summer December day me and my pride were grazing in the hot blazing sun, resting before the walk to find another place to go up ahead. I can smell hot tasty, and delicious food in my jaw, but we don't know what the prey is, we have no idea what It Is until we see it in sigh,t with our dark and big eyes. As though we are very hungry and starving my pride hasn’t eaten in days so this was our chance to finally get something within the Savanna. Me and my brothers didn't know how to start off to get the prey, it was pretty hard to get one of them for a minute. We didn't even bother to try the rumbling of my tummy made me even hungrier. I could feel the tastiness I stroke up on a attack pose. Ready for the fight letting my pride know. That were going in for the attack, we stood in our pose waiting for the right time.                                          

Slowy I went for a move up I had never felt this good before it was like my heart was pounding! like It was forcing me into the herd. As I looked far into the open i smell the fresh taste of food, I crawled up more with my long stubby paws. Hungry furiously starving As soon and I crawled up I stopped…

Silence came over us Standing there still, as i look around In the pitch of nothing, flash of a shadow came but it was Just wind blowing in the air on a sunny day. As I could tell something was wrong when i mean wrong very wrong. I wanted this so bad I went out for the kill when I wasn't supposed to, I was shocked with pain as my heart.was trying to come out of me. They started to run as i could tell one would be prey as I was right we went in for the baby caf. I smell the yummy taste of fleshy food in my mouth. Grabbing It with my big jaw Biting on it angshseley. As dark air comes over us filling up the morning sky. Running and biting and grabbing the caf with my jaw pulling it onto the grass. soon we had company the crocodile wanted some to, I refused pulling it away. Harshly it turned into tug of wars anger appeared over us. But we didn't know we had more company the feel trembling in my heart. The buffalos were next to us Breathing on us. With smoke comeing from their nose. As If they were going to go on an unstoppable rampage as, We still tried to get the prey. As one of the buffalos chased me I was hungry tired and couldn't run that fast, i could hear voices in my head. I left the prey to the rest of the pride. Running for my life As I saw that one of the other buffalos chased one of my pride away.Tossing me in the air Chasing me
Into the open. I was deeply worried and mad we wouldn't get It. Lighting passes in me The smell and taste of that food went down the drain as we had failed. My body was shaking like a saw going in me. Panicking deadly Teling me off, As we didn't get the caf, Running back to our spot.

                                              THe ending to this all

               As we walked back to the spot, I felt a shock, And stopped, I
                                turned and looked at Angel Sammy: and said
                                                                     Hey angel?
                          Angel: yes sammy what is it?
                                                     Sammy: Well i umm
                                                 Angel: Yes??
                                                    Sammy: What will you do when Im gone, What will    
                                                Angel: …              happen with the pride??
                                              Angel: We don’t know what we'll do.
                    After the talk sammy went out back to the pride.
                                        I wonder what would be going on at the pride
                                            Walking In the sandy savannah, thinking
                                                   With my mind open, glaring into
                                                        The sun., as I could hear
                                                            My heart pounding.
                            I looked over into the open to find one of my pride members
                      Looking dead flat laying on the cold grown moaning unable to hear it
                                                    Sammy: Lilly are you okay!!
                                         Lilly:I'll be fine sammy go back to the pride.
                                   Sammy:No!, i won't leave you lilly you mean a lot to me, as a    
                                                                       Friend!!!.
                                          Lilly:plz go back and save our pride plz.
                                  As sammie heard those words she put her head down and
                                               Said okay, and walked back to the pride.


                             End
                                    At Least we tried our best of getting the prey.
Better luck next time for us to find and get dinner.
                                                 For me and my pride, again

Thursday, June 2, 2016

Tasmanian devils



                      This is a tasmanian devil, and some facts about it
                                                        I made it on thinglink,
                                                              Hope you enjoy looking