Write that Essay work (English)

The Adverb start

Curiously, quickly, importantly, firstly, remarkably, 

similarly, significantly, surprisingly, readily, Consequently, shockingly

Interestingly, Confusingly, Concerningly.

Confusingly, I stared at the object in front of me.

Surprisingly, there stood a girl who looked similar to me.

Curiously, I stuck my head out the window to see what the other kids were doing.

Shockingly, I was unable to move from the scene before me.

Quickly, I hurried to class not wanting to be late.

Ironically, the hero has an intriguing birth story that shows they are destined for a great journey.

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Begin with a Preposition

In, Against, before, between, over, behind, within, under

Below, At, For, Throughout, Near, About

Beside,

Throughout the centuries, our world changed to having new tech to creating new foods and clothes, to making new tv shows and games

Within the deep sea, lives creatures that have still yet to be discovered by humankind.

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Basic body paragraph

Point - State the point you want to make

Evidence - Provide evidence to support your point (2-3 sentences)

Explain - Explain what your point demonstrated: (2 sentences)

Link - Write a sentence linking to the next paragraph

(PEEL)

Point - Martha is bullied at school

Reformed point -  throughout the novel, 'Abomination' Martha is bullied at school

Evidence - An example of this incident with the girls

throwing water over the stall onto Martha, When she came out of the stall

They punched her in the stomach and called her a Slut, 

This made Martha feel angry and upset

Explain - Unsurprisingly, this is an example of physical bullying by students towards Martha. 

There was an imbalance of power between 

Martha and her bullies because there was one of her and three of them.

Link - Another way Martha experiences suffering is at the hands of her parents, and the church of the Righteous