Examples: Committed, Undaunted, determined,
forced, gifted, blighted, thrilled, delighted, blessed, overpowered,
Slaughtered, thrilled, United, Delighted, conflicted, respected,
intimidated,
Forced into it, Alex had no choice but to obey orders
Delighted, that in front of me was a big cup of ice cream
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The W-Start sentence
Example: Who, Whom, While, When, What,
Where, Whereas, whilst
When I was asleep I was sure I could feel something looking at me, boring into my head while I slept
Whilst the children were outside playing, the teachers were having a party.
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When the world stopped spinning
Surprisingly I couldn't help but stare into the nothingness as chaos went on
Silently as it all went down in one thing
Throughout that time, I still remember how you looked at me
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PEEL
Kingdom hearts
Point - Kingdom Hearts is not understandable
Reformed point - Kingdom Hearts logic is really just weird and not understandable.
Evidence - An example of my point is in one of the seven games, Birth by Sleep, where it is possible to make human-like creatures out of the darkness from a person's body. This happened once to a boy named Ventus who's human-like creature was named Vanitas, who happened to look like another character and not like Ventus, but more like a boy named Sora.
Explain - Surprisingly this is an example of someone who has a BIG imagination. I mean, in all honesty, not even Ventus knew what Sora looked like and still managed to make Vanitas look like Sora. Where is the logic in that?
Link - Another way we see illogical stuff within Kingdom Hearts is in Kingdom Hearts 3 there is a Frozen storyline where Elsa makes ice falls all around you somehow? It also turns into a labyrinth????
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Essay INTRODUCTION
Title of your novel (Abomination)
Author of the novel (Robert Swindells)
Key Argument/Premise (The character of Martha and her changes are important to the story)
Outline of essay
1 no longer fearful - She can stand up to her dad
2 She gets friends - Builds her confidence so she's not afraid.
3 Takes more Risks - Leaves the house
(NOT DONE I REPEAT NOT DONE)
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