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Wednesday, September 12, 2018

Recount of Jo Berludi Chapter 1-3

Chapter 1 - Introducing Jo Burludi

The book starts off with an introduction, there is Jo and Woof Jo's Dog.
it is said that where ever Jo goes Woof goes to expect for when Jo has to go to school on the weekdays, Even Jo's mother doesn't know how much time they spend together each day, During the night Jo's mum thinks that Woof is asleep in his kennel but Jo brings them inside due to not being able to think of Woof cold alone outside.
Pass on the next side of the page.
Jo's mum gets Burundi a detective kit for his eighth birthday, it came with binoculars, magnifying glass a torch, fingerprint powder, a notebook and a pen with it along with a camera and a cap and mustache.

Chapter 2 -. The missing underwear Mystery

In chapter 2 Jo's mum couldn't find her phone so being Jo he helped her by dialing her mum's phone number for her cell phone, which will ring her mum's phone before he leaves he gets a call from the P's about missing underwear and needs help.

Chapter 3 -

In chapter 3 Jo, Woof and Sal go to Mr. and Mrs. P to solve a mystery, the 2 said something about their underwear going missing, at the start Jo questions Mr. and Mrs. P about what they were doing when the underwear went missing, they also asked for info on how much and what the underwear that went missing looked liked, during then they went to the P's yard to see a piece of fabric dangling over the fence, to take it off to see underwear but is confused on who would want big Underwear?

1 comment:

  1. Kia ora Ruby. You gave short and sweet recaps for each chapter, well done! I wonder if you and I can go over how and when to use commas. Sometimes you have them in the right spots, but a lot of the times you have them where we could actually use a full stop instead! I think this would really help take your writing to the next level and improve your punctuation use.

    - Miss Birtch

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