A dogs life with her best friend (Marshmello)

In class, we watched a video (Video above) and were told to write the perspective of the girl or the dog, from the start of the video, here is what I ended up with.

I sat within the midst of the crowd as I was handed a birthday present, I opened the lid to see a yellow bow, I picked up the bow as I looked at it with an unhappy smile, why a bow? did I do something bad? I thought as I watched my uncle leave and soon come back as I watched him bring in a golden retriever.

My face lit up as I began to stir in my seat as I gave a wave to little puppy as the puppy was handed to me as it licked my face, my smile grew, I felt so happy.

I stuck the yellow bow on the dog as I smiled for the camera.

-Later that day-

I stood near the wall frame as my Uncle got a pencil as he put a line as to how tall In was, I bent down so he could do it for Yellow my puppy, I decided to name her Yellow from the bow I was given for her.
I watched as my uncle drew a line under Yellow as I smiled, life couldn't of been better.

-years later-

I was standing against the wall I knew too well as my dad stuck a line above my head as he left, I grabbed a small dog biscuit out of my pocket a made a circular motion in front of yellow as I laughed and leaned down giving it to her as she ate it.
I then began to ruffle her fur as I smiled walking away.

-at school-

I sat on the sports bench at school while the popular girls were picking who they wanted in their team... of course, I didn't get picked but laughed at as I sat there playing with the ball in my hand.

-home-

I had a ball in my hand as I stuck it on the ground and played of a bit of football with yellow, she was a great buddy to play with when no one would, even if she was a dog.
she would always be there for me.

-Next day school-

I was leaning on my knee on the grass as we were going to get our photo taken as a group as one of the girls pushed past me which made me end up standing for the photo instead of kneeling, I didn't mind, kneeling hurts my knees, I gave a small smile with my mouth closed as the man taking our photo told me to give a big smile, I gave a small shy nod as I brushed some hair from my face giving a small as I showed my teeth that had braces on them, I looked to my side to see the girls laughing at me.
when they laughed at me I just felt like everything stopped I didn't
know what to do...

After that, I rushed home as I threw my bag down laying on the sofa as I heard the paw sounds of yellow asking to be allowed in, I got up as I opened the door for her as she followed me to the sofa as I sat down as she sat on the ground next to me, I looked at Yellow and gave a small laugh as I covered my mouth as Yellow stuck her paw on my hand, she really was a blessing for me having her made me so happy.
I grabbed her paw as she leaned on my hand as I got up and did the circular motion waiting for her to make a circle motion, I gave a small frown as she lays on the ground with her head on the carpet

In motion of being finished.

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What did I think of this task?
I loved this task because I could be free with what I wanted to write and how I would write the story.

Did I like this?
What did I like it yes I liked it?
why? Because it was involved animals, and I myself loves animals very much.