Hi Ruby, I like the Idea of picking up rubbish to make our environment tidy. I also like how you made it nice and simple to read. Maybe next time you can add pictures in to make it more eye-catching. Overall, good job!
Hello Ruby. i like how you did a single screenshot the whole thing so you did not have to copy and paste it from your google doc. Overall I like how you added the red and bold text it makes it stick out.
Hi Ruby, I really like what you think sustainability means. I like how you made notes on what you should do if you see rubbish. Maybe next time you could add more ways to stay sustainable and some photos so people understand a little more. Other than that keep up the great work!
Clear,concise (means straight to the point) and well presented Ruby. Great to see that we are all starting to think of the impact we have (carbon footprint) on our world. Miss L
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Hi Ruby, I like the Idea of picking up rubbish to make our environment tidy. I also like how you made it nice and simple to read. Maybe next time you can add pictures in to make it more eye-catching. Overall, good job!
ReplyDeleteHello Ruby. i like how you did a single screenshot the whole thing so you did not have to copy and paste it from your google doc. Overall I like how you added the red and bold text it makes it stick out.
ReplyDeleteHi Ruby, I really like what you think sustainability means. I like how you made notes on what you should do if you see rubbish. Maybe next time you could add more ways to stay sustainable and some photos so people understand a little more. Other than that keep up the great work!
ReplyDeleteHello Trisha
DeleteThank you for commenting and I'll make sure to do that next time
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ReplyDeleteClear,concise (means straight to the point) and well presented Ruby. Great to see that we are all starting to think of the impact we have (carbon footprint) on our world. Miss L
ReplyDeleteThank you Miss L for the comment I appreciate it OwO
DeleteI also can't wait to try to make paper in text styles.