State your point
Over the decades our technology has changed to the point where information moves quickly
around the world.
Why it matter
Because the person you may be sending the note to may be overseas and far away from you,
which isn’t good if the note is important, and if it’s important then it’s likely that what
you're trying to stop them from doing has already been done, or if you're sending them
a letter for a meeting it’s likely the meeting has already passed.
Evidence
We no longer need to send long-awaited envelopes oversea to reach its destination when nowadays
all we need to do is open up Gmail write something in and press send and it’s automatically
sent to the rightful person, another function is that you can also send pictures and videos from
youtube to them. There are also apps such as Skype where you can video call the people
close to you so you're always up to date on what they're doing.
Sum up
Our technology advancements have allowed us amazing things and they also help us keep up
to date on things so we're not missing out on important events or missing out on the monthly
video chat with your parents.
Over the decades our technology has changed to the point where information moves quickly
around the world.
Why it matter
Because the person you may be sending the note to may be overseas and far away from you,
which isn’t good if the note is important, and if it’s important then it’s likely that what
you're trying to stop them from doing has already been done, or if you're sending them
a letter for a meeting it’s likely the meeting has already passed.
Evidence
We no longer need to send long-awaited envelopes oversea to reach its destination when nowadays
all we need to do is open up Gmail write something in and press send and it’s automatically
sent to the rightful person, another function is that you can also send pictures and videos from
youtube to them. There are also apps such as Skype where you can video call the people
close to you so you're always up to date on what they're doing.
Sum up
Our technology advancements have allowed us amazing things and they also help us keep up
to date on things so we're not missing out on important events or missing out on the monthly
video chat with your parents.
Hello, Ruby!
ReplyDeleteI really liked the points that you have described in your paragraph, they do show how we have advanced in our use of technology. However, some parts you have described don't line up. This could have been my doing, because it went off the page and I tried to fix that. Note to self.
Great paragraph! :)